This is an older poem, but I love it
I guess it's probably not that cool to say you love your own poem? Oh well ...
the rise and fall
my zippers fall like angels, like stars
my hand folds into yours
silk in a pleat
falls into yours like light
into the mouth of a tunnel
my shoulder rises against your lips
a dove winging home
a white veil lifted
for a kiss
I lift my mouth for your kiss
lift my hopes one last time
like a dying man's wish
©burningmoon
the rise and fall
my zippers fall like angels, like stars
my hand folds into yours
silk in a pleat
falls into yours like light
into the mouth of a tunnel
my shoulder rises against your lips
a dove winging home
a white veil lifted
for a kiss
I lift my mouth for your kiss
lift my hopes one last time
like a dying man's wish
©burningmoon
posted by burning moon at 1:06 AM
8 Comments:
It is a beautiful poem, and I do not see anything wrong with liking or loving one of your own poems, they come straight from you, love yourself, love your poetry,
love the world
the universe
the infinite infinity of endless
diversity
I may be spinning out of control lol.
lol, oh dear ...
bloody hippies!
*singing loudly*
With pretty flowers in her hair
flowers everywhere
I love the flower girl
she seemed so sweet and kind
she came into my mind
To my
to my miiiiiind
I just had to say
hello!!!
hello hello
she smiled up at me
and all that I could see
was some little flowers in her hair
And I knew
I knew
I knew
she could make me happy
happy
happy
little flowers in her hair
flowers everywhere!!!!!
I feel quite ill now rofl
I must lie down
LOL! I like that song!
oh now thats just tragic lol, it was a hit in like 1965 ...
the Cowsills wasnt it?
something like that
and you call me a hippy LOL
Ha I say
*grin*
cheeky shit.
The sun is shining here for the first time in days, and I'm trying hard to write my stupid essay lol. It's due on Friday and I'm sooooo far behind!
I have a hundred loads of washing on the line because the weather has been so foul.
I think it was the Cowsills yeah. What a stupid name huh? I always think of cowpats when I hear it
we have been shrouded in mist for days lol
toss everything in the dryer, sure, it shrinks, but it comes out all fluffy and warm and snuggly lol
And do your essay, I shall go quiet so you can get on with it.
Cowsills, totally stupid name,but its the name of a flower isnt it?
I think so
be good
:)
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