Saturday, May 27, 2006

Playing Dirty

Yo there slut fairy,
spitting up your morning juice -
have your retarded highchair-fest
with your bottle-fed hand-reared friends.
Gurgle last night's dredge
into the burps and farts
from frosty lime succulents.

One wink out of line and you're mine.
I'll take you out like a zipper line,
like a freak to a ball, like a tiny bikini
when the weather is fine.

Hold your head and moan cos you're sore,
best watch your back on your way
out the door.


Blogger Chris Never said...

I love it when you crack it with someone

your vitriol is almost as acidic as mine own *grins*

9:23 PM  
Blogger burning moon said...

heh, thanks. It wasn't about anyone though. I just thought of the phrase slut fairy and the poem sort of grew from that. Then I changed slut fairy because I really don't approve of calling anyone a slut since it smacks of all that sexist double standard bullshit, plus I didn't want the connotations that word threw into the poem, so I changed it to gutter fairy.

9:59 PM  
Blogger Chris Never said...

but slut fairy is fantastic!!!!

I mean, gutter fairy works

but slut fairy rocks lol

10:20 PM  
Blogger Chris Never said...

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10:20 PM  
Blogger burning moon said...

lol, hmmm, I'll think about it.

I can't tell if you're serious or having me on ...

4:21 PM  
Blogger Chris Never said...

serious mate.

its stronger Moon

in my opinion anyway *smile*

4:27 PM  
Blogger burning moon said...

but there's the whole slut thing you know? Implies that if women are sexually free there's something wrong with that. It's perpetuating that whole judgemental binary.

And yeah, you can call a guy a slut too, but they tend to think it's a compliment.

4:51 PM  
Blogger Chris Never said...

Im trying to recall a time when I was called a slut and thought it was a compliment...hmmm...its not coming to me lol.

Ok, I admit, the connotation of slut is could be construed as more offensive than gutter fairy.

But lets examine gutter, it indicates not only a loose morality, it also brings to mind filth and poor hygiene *grin*

Either one is strong, but slut is a stronger poetic image to me, thats all
Im saying Moon.

It is as always, your choice to make, I only ever offer my opinion, freely given, and free to ignore my very wonderful friend

5:18 PM  
Blogger burning moon said...

heh, well alright, you make a good point. I'll change it later. I must admit, I thought slut fairy was pretty cool, lolololol.

5:26 PM  
Blogger burning moon said...

I'm working with feminist critique at the moment as you may have guessed, lol

5:37 PM  
Blogger Chris Never said...

Yes, I kinda figured you were feeling strongly about the issues atm lol.

6:08 PM  

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