Saturday, September 05, 2015

The Sound of Starfall

The sound of star fall is the sound of a heart breaking
each string stretched taut with discord
until finally it snaps

a crack
like gunshot

trust crumpled
fragments scattered
in a shrapnel of dreams

blown on the south wind
piercing eardrums with a black hole
where I love you falls to silence.


Blogger Chris Never said...

oh very good *claps*

Challenge accepted and exceeded *smile*

you are still the bomb :)

hope your life is treating you kindly
my dear

5:54 PM  
Blogger burning moon said...

Hi bird, thanks for lending me some motivation to write something :) * curtseys*

I'm doing okay. Getting through days like there's no tomorrow. Wishing I had more time to do the things I love instead of the things I have to.

How are you?

Jesus Christ! I almost can't post on my own blog! lol, they have so much crap to get through now before you post something ... one day I'll forget my password and it'll be all over.

2:40 PM  
Blogger Chris Never said...

I am in very much the same position, life just sort of consumes all your time, and if you do have a spare moment, you are more likely to collapse on the couch to gather your breath rather than try and create poetry or some other equally pleasant pass time , least that's how I am finding it.

And yes, blogging, like everything else, has become very complex, if we forget our passwords, we will only be able to look upon our body of work remotely, and wistfully wish we could recall where we put our internet keys down hehe

3:51 PM  
Blogger burning moon said...


2:36 AM  

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