Monday, March 30, 2009

Through the Eye of the Needle

How the days strobe past, 
unremarkable in a light-trashed sky. 

In the house on the hill 
the lady has forsaken doctors 
and returned to belief 
in candles and beads. 

Drips of candlewax collect like sweat 
on the top lip of hosannas and hail Mary, 
sky full of grace. 

How the lady burns as she turns 
on rich sheets. All the coins 
weigh so heavy on her eyes- 
pressing her into her grave.

3 Comments:

Blogger burning moon said...

this

1:21 PM  
Blogger Chris Never said...

2 suggestions on this,

S3, last line, drop the 'is'

S4, last line, drop the second 'her' and change to 'the'

3:34 PM  
Blogger burning moon said...

Thanks :)

12:37 PM  

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