Through the Eye of the Needle
How the days strobe past,
unremarkable
in a light-trashed sky.
In the house on the hill
the lady has forsaken doctors
and returned to belief
in candles and beads.
Drips of candlewax collect like sweat
on the top lip of hosannas and hail Mary,
sky full of grace.
How the lady burns as she turns
on rich sheets.
All the coins
weigh so heavy
on her eyes-
pressing her into her grave.
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S3, last line, drop the 'is'
S4, last line, drop the second 'her' and change to 'the'
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