Photographic Sex
See how their bodies
bleed and boil
into each other
in seamless curls
of steam and skin.
The black and white
stretches and speeds curves
into fast corners,
indistinguishable poses-
no unseemly hair,
just a head of tousled straw
and a starving hunger.
bleed and boil
into each other
in seamless curls
of steam and skin.
The black and white
stretches and speeds curves
into fast corners,
indistinguishable poses-
no unseemly hair,
just a head of tousled straw
and a starving hunger.
3 Comments:
Am I working on this one?
or just commenting :)
lol, just commenting I think. It's just a bit of fluff
You call a piece entitled
Photographic Sex
a bit of fluff
I see *laughs*
We I like it, opening strophe, potent and sensual
the second, sets up the conclusion nicely
And the last line is my favorite,
it gives the whole a nice sharp and strong sensation on which to finish,very cool.
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