Thursday, March 26, 2009

Photographic Sex

See how their bodies
bleed and boil
into each other
in seamless curls
of steam and skin.

The black and white
stretches and speeds curves
into fast corners,
indistinguishable poses-

no unseemly hair,
just a head of tousled straw
and a starving hunger.


Blogger Chris Never said...

Am I working on this one?

or just commenting :)

8:27 PM  
Blogger burning moon said...

lol, just commenting I think. It's just a bit of fluff

8:37 PM  
Blogger Chris Never said...

You call a piece entitled

Photographic Sex

a bit of fluff

I see *laughs*

We I like it, opening strophe, potent and sensual

the second, sets up the conclusion nicely

And the last line is my favorite,
it gives the whole a nice sharp and strong sensation on which to finish,very cool.

8:51 PM  

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