Sunday, April 20, 2008

The Pelicans

Where minnows minuet in wet
a muddy nestle of birds
rafts the river rapids.

A feather net of fishermen,
their grey leaves rustle
and lift

above the elephant clouds
where blueness steps high
over trees.


Blogger Chris Never said...

Where minnows minuet in wet

What a line.

rafts the river rapids.

Is this some sort of exercise?
you seem to be deliberately making particular sound formations with the words, or am I off base and its just whats coming?

3:04 PM  
Blogger burning moon said...

It's just what's coming. I was listening to music as I wrote. Might have something to do with it. This was inspired by a Utube video of pelicans on a river in Canada.

3:10 PM  
Blogger lasue3 said...

Love the alliteration!! Love your poems!! Miss you much. Laura

2:33 AM  

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