The Pelicans
Where minnows minuet in wet
a muddy nestle of birds
rafts the river rapids.
A feather net of fishermen,
their grey leaves rustle
and lift
above the elephant clouds
where blueness steps high
over trees.
a muddy nestle of birds
rafts the river rapids.
A feather net of fishermen,
their grey leaves rustle
and lift
above the elephant clouds
where blueness steps high
over trees.
3 Comments:
Where minnows minuet in wet
What a line.
rafts the river rapids.
Is this some sort of exercise?
you seem to be deliberately making particular sound formations with the words, or am I off base and its just whats coming?
It's just what's coming. I was listening to music as I wrote. Might have something to do with it. This was inspired by a Utube video of pelicans on a river in Canada.
Love the alliteration!! Love your poems!! Miss you much. Laura
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