Sunday, November 19, 2006

Jake's First Payday

You're my boot button boy,
shiny eyes and polished smile.

Fifteen pennies in your pocket,
and so proud
to have earned them all yourself.

Money can't buy the medals
such an acheivement pins to your chest.


Blogger Kora said...

good good but i feel it probably could have gone on a bit. but really good. See ya...


11:32 AM  
Blogger burning moon said...

hi Kora, thanks.

4:12 PM  
Blogger Chris Never said...

Nice capturing of a moment Moon, such triumphs are solid gold lockets to parents *smile*

4:33 PM  
Blogger burning moon said...

mmm *smile*

actually it was jacob's first real professional standard mixing desk. He saved up and bought it himself. He was SO excited!

5:28 PM  
Blogger Irene said...

You have a beautiful way with words. I can feel the pride shining through your poem. Keep at it! =)

8:16 PM  
Blogger burning moon said...

Thanks Irene :)

8:19 PM  

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