Stone Roses
This poem was inspired by a desert rose stone that I picked up at a market. If you've never seen one, here's a picture:
In my hand I hold a desert rose,
chalk edges on petals of stone.
I am the moon,
dusted into your eyes.
The sound of your name,
soft as sands
flowing to the call
of the wind in the desert,
eats away the stone
bloomed in my palm.
In the hot breath of rose
we fade -
In my hand I hold a desert rose,
chalk edges on petals of stone.
I am the moon,
dusted into your eyes.
The sound of your name,
soft as sands
flowing to the call
of the wind in the desert,
eats away the stone
bloomed in my palm.
In the hot breath of rose
we fade -
6 Comments:
Love it, a beautiful image Moon
Only suggestion
drop the last line
Dont think you need it
and it changes the cadence of the poem for me.
"I am the moon dusted in your eyes", great poetry!!
hmmm, you might be right at that Chris. I always have trouble knowing when to stop.
Thanks Pat, glad you liked it. Thanks for stopping by.
moon
hello friend. Beatiful poem. I know long time been really busy. okay gonna go need to go to store and get a couple of items. it is nice to talk to you again. love always-
-kora
I like the punch that last line brings. =) I think you're a gifted writer. Keep at it!
Hi Irene and Cora, thanks.
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