Poets of Delicate Angst
yes, it's a rant I'm afraid ...
In your pause, pace, pedantic phrase -
where is the passion,
the rage against rage
or procrastination?
The clever use of space
in its dance across the page,
paper cut of rapier riposte.
Take a sledgehammer and pound
the blue into finger grooves,
forget the clever prance in prose
and shout in my face.
Forget your sensitive, new-age pose
among the pansies along the fence,
pick a side,
even the wrong side.
Lose your decadent American drawl,
in your haste to compel me,
propel me into tangled unutterable scrawl.
I want more than your heart
in wallpaper bouquets -
I want your foetus,
your unformed, bloody mass
of inspiration.
In your pause, pace, pedantic phrase -
where is the passion,
the rage against rage
or procrastination?
The clever use of space
in its dance across the page,
paper cut of rapier riposte.
Take a sledgehammer and pound
the blue into finger grooves,
forget the clever prance in prose
and shout in my face.
Forget your sensitive, new-age pose
among the pansies along the fence,
pick a side,
even the wrong side.
Lose your decadent American drawl,
in your haste to compel me,
propel me into tangled unutterable scrawl.
I want more than your heart
in wallpaper bouquets -
I want your foetus,
your unformed, bloody mass
of inspiration.
4 Comments:
Hell Yeah!!!!
*dazzling grin*
Come on world, this rocks
Well done Moon, you blew the lid right off with this one
Very cool
"Lose your decadent American drawl,
in your haste to compel me,
propel me into tangled unutterable scrawl."
That is exactly what I want poets to do also! Nice expressions here.
"I want more than your heart in wallpaper bouquets - I want your foetus,
your unformed, bloody mass of inspiration."
Wow! That is asking a lot but I think poetry can deliver this great request. I love poetry because a poet often gives their heart to the poem.
Loved this poem for its unique expressions and funny moments.
Thanks for sharing.
Beautiful but oh so true rant! I wish more people put their heart into what they write...
Professional poets are good but there is something missing. I think they have become so perfessional that they forget how to write. Maybe but yet again that is me. teehee
-kora
Thanks guys. Sorry about the comments not showing up for a while. I switched to moderator control because I got one of those spam posts, but I think I might change back, other wise I'll always be forgetting to check for comments.
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