Wednesday, August 25, 2010

Night Twist

Tied in shifting shades of lavender
are moon curves,
sizzle fingers search -
his , and hers, and his,
exposed -
the surrender of neck,
spinal arch a bridge
to tumbled clouds
where the thunder roars.


Blogger Chris Never said...

amazing how the placement of the single word 'exposed' has so much impact in this piece.

I love the way poetry can make you stop, pause, and then continue, all at the whim of the poet, its very cool

Sensual writing my dear *smile*

11:10 PM  
Blogger burning moon said...

:) thanks. nice to do that sometimes.

3:27 AM  

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