Saving Light
Rain plunks
like a Japanese guitar.
Drops tumble
like words in a poem
down the page.
Cherry tree boughs
shine black and sturdy
through the petalled
blush of blossom
It's the end of September,
the beginning of daylight saving,
and the dark of the moon.
There's a cascade effect
of water and new openings
in the absence of moonlight.
like a Japanese guitar.
Drops tumble
like words in a poem
down the page.
Cherry tree boughs
shine black and sturdy
through the petalled
blush of blossom
It's the end of September,
the beginning of daylight saving,
and the dark of the moon.
There's a cascade effect
of water and new openings
in the absence of moonlight.
2 Comments:
Interesting form chosen here, and the Japanese theme is strong throughout, only suggestion, Line 6, should perhaps be 'sturdy'
Nicely woven kid.
lol. yes, so it should.
I didn't even notice.
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