posted by burning moon at 2:27 PM
This is just lovely, what a glorious image.
:)pity I couldn't come up with the rest of the poem, lol.
The light fallslike wateryour hair drenched with itA soft shakeof your headsprays day across usdappled dropletsof morning shimmer shineupon my white shirtthe deeper stainof afternoonsoaking into colour uspurpling shadesof duskhmmm, Im a little rusty lol
I like that. It's very pretty. Maybe needs one more line to end it.purpling shades of duskas we bathe?
you should post it somewheres
First poetic lines Ive written since June, bizarre hey?I like your ending *smile*
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This is just lovely, what a glorious image.
:)
pity I couldn't come up with the rest of the poem, lol.
The light falls
like water
your hair
drenched with it
A soft shake
of your head
sprays day
across us
dappled droplets
of morning
shimmer shine
upon my white shirt
the deeper stain
of afternoon
soaking in
to colour us
purpling shades
of dusk
hmmm, Im a little rusty lol
I like that. It's very pretty. Maybe needs one more line to end it.
purpling shades
of dusk
as we bathe?
you should post it somewheres
First poetic lines Ive written since June, bizarre hey?
I like your ending
*smile*
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