Thursday, April 30, 2009


On sapphire days
she emmanates waves of heat.

His kiss fills her mouth
with light-

persuasion she cannot evade.
She stays until darkness shimmers

hollows into cheek and neck,
undermines her gloss.

All the things she's laid
so carefully behind

rise up inside.


Blogger Chris Never said...

I love it when you write like this.

It is so intense and emotive

great stuff

3:41 PM  
Blogger burning moon said...

*grin* thanks. wrote it for a picture. It doesn't quite work for me yet, but maybe it will one day. I like the ending.

1:36 PM  
Blogger Chris Never said...

Post the pic for me?

3:22 PM  
Blogger burning moon said...

won't post for some reason. There must be some kind of block to stop you linking to it. It's here:

needless to say, my poem wasn't chosen to go with it in the publication. Never mind. I quite like the poem in any case.

It's the blue girl at the top, by Coleen Shin

3:31 PM  
Blogger Chris Never said...

Thanks for the link, although its want me to sign in to Mipo lol


Nothing is ever easy in the interworld lol

why isnt interworld a word?

3:47 PM  
Blogger burning moon said...

lol. I think you just made it one.

sorry about the picture. I'll try again

9:59 PM  

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