Thursday, April 30, 2009

Unrest

On sapphire days
she emmanates waves of heat.

His kiss fills her mouth
with light-

persuasion she cannot evade.
She stays until darkness shimmers

hollows into cheek and neck,
undermines her gloss.

All the things she's laid
so carefully behind

rise up inside.

6 Comments:

Blogger Chris Never said...

I love it when you write like this.


It is so intense and emotive


great stuff

3:41 PM  
Blogger burning moon said...

*grin* thanks. wrote it for a picture. It doesn't quite work for me yet, but maybe it will one day. I like the ending.

1:36 PM  
Blogger Chris Never said...

Post the pic for me?

3:22 PM  
Blogger burning moon said...

won't post for some reason. There must be some kind of block to stop you linking to it. It's here:

http://mipoesias.ning.com/group/thechallenge/forum/topics/april-challenge


needless to say, my poem wasn't chosen to go with it in the publication. Never mind. I quite like the poem in any case.

It's the blue girl at the top, by Coleen Shin

3:31 PM  
Blogger Chris Never said...

Thanks for the link, although its want me to sign in to Mipo lol

Sighs

Nothing is ever easy in the interworld lol

why isnt interworld a word?

3:47 PM  
Blogger burning moon said...

lol. I think you just made it one.

sorry about the picture. I'll try again

9:59 PM  

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