Unrest
On sapphire days
she emmanates waves of heat.
His kiss fills her mouth
with light-
persuasion she cannot evade.
She stays until darkness shimmers
hollows into cheek and neck,
undermines her gloss.
All the things she's laid
so carefully behind
rise up inside.
she emmanates waves of heat.
His kiss fills her mouth
with light-
persuasion she cannot evade.
She stays until darkness shimmers
hollows into cheek and neck,
undermines her gloss.
All the things she's laid
so carefully behind
rise up inside.
posted by burning moon at 9:20 PM
6 Comments:
I love it when you write like this.
It is so intense and emotive
great stuff
*grin* thanks. wrote it for a picture. It doesn't quite work for me yet, but maybe it will one day. I like the ending.
Post the pic for me?
won't post for some reason. There must be some kind of block to stop you linking to it. It's here:
http://mipoesias.ning.com/group/thechallenge/forum/topics/april-challenge
needless to say, my poem wasn't chosen to go with it in the publication. Never mind. I quite like the poem in any case.
It's the blue girl at the top, by Coleen Shin
Thanks for the link, although its want me to sign in to Mipo lol
Sighs
Nothing is ever easy in the interworld lol
why isnt interworld a word?
lol. I think you just made it one.
sorry about the picture. I'll try again
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