Friday, June 27, 2008


a web of branches
finer than any spider could weave
sways raindrops like party lights,
or fireflies, light trapped
in the shining bulbs.

She has trimmed the window
with lilac and lace,
furnished with chestnut timber
glowing like fire coals.

Still the edges of the mirror
are kissed with ice.


Blogger Chris Never said...

she had trimmed the window with
lilac and lace

my favourite lines *smile*

Beautiful write Moon

and a sting in the ending, very nice.

3:00 PM  
Blogger burning moon said...

thanks. my room is very pretty now that I've redecorated. I finally got to let my feminine side have free rein!

I'm quite distressingly girly, lol

3:16 PM  

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