Monday, June 04, 2007

I just read a great poem


Blogger Chris Never said...

I went and read this, it is an excellent write, so very earthy and real

3:01 PM  
Blogger burning moon said...

I loved the pale curve of bones

5:01 PM  
Blogger Chris Never said...

"pale curve of your ribs" is the line, yes, most evocative

actually, you can or have already
used "pale curve of your bones"
in a poem

or maybe it was me


cannot remember

5:34 PM  
Blogger burning moon said...

mmm, I thought it sounded a bit familiar. Might have been you I think.

5:56 PM  

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