posted by burning moon at 2:51 PM
I went and read this, it is an excellent write, so very earthy and real
I loved the pale curve of bones
"pale curve of your ribs" is the line, yes, most evocativeactually, you can or have alreadyused "pale curve of your bones"in a poemor maybe it was mehmmmmcannot remember
mmm, I thought it sounded a bit familiar. Might have been you I think.
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I went and read this, it is an excellent write, so very earthy and real
I loved the pale curve of bones
"pale curve of your ribs" is the line, yes, most evocative
actually, you can or have already
used "pale curve of your bones"
in a poem
or maybe it was me
hmmmm
cannot remember
mmm, I thought it sounded a bit familiar. Might have been you I think.
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