Saturday, September 22, 2007

On the Chair in the Corner

i
She wears the moon
underneath her clothes
so no one will know.

Her face is the shape
of an arrow, indicating
a downward trajectory, or
a wedge of lemon on the tongue.

Her eyes
are the colour of background.

ii
The moon is a body -
moon-shaped body -
luminous only in lightfall.

Sliding into darkness beneath
an arrow of chin,
under cover of cloth,
it becomes sharp
as a sliver of lemon
placed lightly
between lips -

tart
on the tongue -

sucking into a dusk
coloured gaze.

2 Comments:

Blogger Chris Never said...

Outstanding write,


Her eyes
are the colour of background.

and

sucking into a dusk
coloured gaze.


You come up with wondrous lines kid

3:20 PM  
Blogger burning moon said...

thanks. I wrote this for one of those picture competitions. It's quite tricky to write a meaningful poem for a picture sometimes. I really didn't mean to write another 'moon' poem, but that's what it ended up as

3:45 PM  

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