Comments on burning-moon: conversation with myself

This piece is not that offensive kid, I have seen ...

2009-04-06T15:38:00.000-07:00

This piece is not that offensive kid, I have seen much worse, come to think of it, I have written much worse *laughs*

Post it, work it, it is a worthy work and should be seen, do not fear repercussions, they just mean you are making people think, although, some shit storms are best avoided lol

I dont know, I cannot make up my mind today

I'll probably manage to enrage every poet on the i...

2009-04-05T19:30:00.000-07:00

I'll probably manage to enrage every poet on the internet with this. I don't know whether I'm brave enough to post it anywhere. You know what some of the people on message boards are like.

I'm glad you thought it worked ok.

And your beliefs are mirrored by large sectors of ...

2009-04-05T18:02:00.000-07:00

And your beliefs are mirrored by large sectors of the community, I believe in something, just, nothing specific I guess.

I enjoyed the whole 3 voice set up in this, I love messing with multiple voices in poems, I am rarely as successful as this, but I do really like trying it out sometimes.