tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23936602.post3250803060454878486..comments2009-07-02T13:48:57.741-07:00burning moonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16693680901375568768noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23936602.post-38856304368152473032009-07-02T13:48:57.741-07:002009-07-02T13:48:57.741-07:00Hi Laura, thank you!burning moonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16693680901375568768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23936602.post-67904120293099993712009-07-02T02:15:26.062-07:002009-07-02T02:15:26.062-07:00This one leaves me speechless, in awe.<br /><br />You get better all the time!<br /><br />Best wishes always, Laura2 peas in a podhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07313989749690387359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23936602.post-46220170924566599922009-05-20T15:31:05.157-07:002009-05-20T15:31:05.157-07:00Gotta love it when a poem lands like that *grin*, it sorta falls into your lap with a little note from God attached reading "Enjoy"Chris Neverhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16910931760007798589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23936602.post-55683136768075089342009-05-18T20:26:00.000-07:002009-05-18T20:26:00.000-07:00The first strophe came out just like that. The second was right behind it, and the last one arrived the next morning.<br /><br />The only real editing I did was to take out two lines that were between the first and second strophe that didn't seem to really connect with the rest of the poem.burning moonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16693680901375568768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23936602.post-19909760425326599542009-05-18T16:16:00.000-07:002009-05-18T16:16:00.000-07:00Love the whole mail metaphor thing in this , very cool kid, wonder if it just came out like that or if you had to work at it?Chris Neverhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16910931760007798589noreply@blogger.com